Amazing job guys. I went through the report and it was honestly impressed. It wasn't until everything came together in a final document that I realized how detailed we were in our explanations and calculations. I thought it was very thorough and covered everything that was required and more.
I made some edits, changed the wording and added a few things to some of the sections. One of the things I tried to fix was keeping the voice uniform from section to section. However, I tend to write in past tense and a lot of the report was written in present tense so I tried my best to write any changes in present tense....didn't always work but I doubt she'll care (its not an english course haha). Excellent job on documenting thought processes for calculations and design objectives.
Take a look if any changes still need to be made we have an hour and a half
Chris
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